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About Me Member Deviously Deviant leonhart8323/Male/Australia Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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Sun Nov 25, 2007, 9:01 PM
Ok, so I am about the last person I know to reach this goal, but it doesn't make me any less proud. I will be trying to get some more of my new story up and going just to see how it all goes. He is a sneak peek of the intro, just to explain where I am heading.

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Start of the story starts in a Bar. Describe the inside of the bar - fan, clientele smells etc. Explain the history of the place to create familiarity.
Story shifts to outside the window where a man is walking in the middle of the road. - explain how people don't seem to notice - no cars sway, no one calling, no horns.
Man is walking slow and unhindered as if in a trance.
Man stops out the front of a school. Turns to face the gate and waits in the middle of the road.
Explain surroundings - parents buses, lollip ladies etc.
School Bell sounds, kids come out. Nobody still seems to notice the man.
A small girl comes out of the school with friends. Signals to the man in the middle of the road discretely to met her over in the park where they always meet.
Girls says goodbye to friends and walks home with Man.
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It is very vague so far obviously but that will be sort of the intro that I hope to write at least while I am still in Brisbane.

It seems to be pretty slow for everyone when it comes to additions to deviantart. I have a few photos I will be posting once I get back and there are probably two stories I want to get done by the end of the year. But not likely at the rate it took me to finish penguin shoes.

Anyways better get back to it all.

Everyone take care.

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  • Current Residence: Rockhampton, Australia
  • Interests: Gaming, Writing, Photography
  • Favourite movie: The Green Mile
  • Favourite band or musician: Goo Goo Dolls
  • Favourite poet or writer: Bodos
  • Favourite photographer: Angelich
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy 7
  • Personal Quote: Life is a fucker.........deal with it
  • Tools of the Trade: Over active imagination......

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:iconackkarin:
Hey. this person wrote something about you in their blog.. CLICK HERE

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:rose:
Slainte chugat
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Gura slan an scealai
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:iconackkarin:
Hey. this person wrote something about you in their blog.. CLICK HERE

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:rose:
Slainte chugat
:rose:
Gura slan an scealai
:rose:
:iconn1n4:
love your photo ! the landscapes are so beautiful and you know how to catch 'em on pictures :wink:
:iconkatikins:
hey.....

long time no talk. i am not sure if you are avoiding me or what, but i just thought i would say hey.

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hey.

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it's okay, i wouldn't remember me either.
:iconleonhart83:
Well I don't really know what to say, but you have hurt a lot of my friends in the process of whatever you are doing with your life....
:iconmajeure:
Your photos are beautiful. :D
:icondkmadness:
wow..you are very talented!! your writing is awesome seriously...actually bought me to tears at one point which is a hard feat so well done.

Keep it up :D
:iconleonhart83:
Which story are you talking about specifically. If you get the time read my two part story Penguin Shoes, it is my latest..
:iconbodos:
Hey man,
How's it going? give us a yell sometime eh. Trough time again. I've had a bar put on my phone coz apparently it hit a grand. just another drop in the ocean of shit at the moment.

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