Ok, so I am about the last person I know to reach this goal, but it doesn't make me any less proud. I will be trying to get some more of my new story up and going just to see how it all goes. He is a sneak peek of the intro, just to explain where I am heading.
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Start of the story starts in a Bar. Describe the inside of the bar - fan, clientele smells etc. Explain the history of the place to create familiarity.
Story shifts to outside the window where a man is walking in the middle of the road. - explain how people don't seem to notice - no cars sway, no one calling, no horns.
Man is walking slow and unhindered as if in a tranc